How do I improve the number of conversions I am getting on my website? (details below)
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M$2 Answers
Start by answering the What and How question above the fold:
- What are you offering that is unique?
- How can I respond?
Here are some preliminary tips:
1. You need a prominent and clear Call-to-Action (CTA) above the fold.
2. Get rid of the Distracting elements in the left and right columns.
3. Cut your headline to two lines with the main CTA and benefits.
4. If the video is important to understand how it works, then tell me to watch the video, but don't include more than one video no the home page.
5. Just use the avatar in the video. Your customers want to buy the experience and don't need to see "behind the curtain".
6. It's unclear whether the cities listed are the only locations available. Is that just supposed to communicate the time zone?
7. Try including a testimonial that explains the benefits, like "The SecondLife classes are a really stimulating and enjoyable way to learn languages"
You should try running an A/B/n test with Google Website Optimizer (http://www.google.com/websiteoptimizer) to ensure that changes you make actually improve your conversion rate.
If you want to learn more about how to improve your Conversion Rate, read the Conversion Rate Optimization blog at http://www.widerfunnel.com/blog
You can also join the B2C Conversion Optimization group on LinkedIn here: http://www.linkedin.com/e/gis/147227
Good luck!
Chris
I am the head of Conversion Optimization planning at Widerfunnel Marketing, the Google Website Optimizer Authorized Consultant that offers guaranteed conversion rate improvement: http://www.widerfunnel.com
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M$There is not a compelling reason for me to use your service.
Your site negatively impacts the elusive trust factor that is required for strong conversion numbers.
Some things to do:
It looks like you're good at teaching Spanish. Stick to that and hire a pro web design firm.
If you want to use video to relay your message, have the video professionally composed, edited, and encoded. Using youtube the way that you are negatively affects trust. At the very least, your video should clearly display what is being offered.
Make it very easy to buy and tell me why I need to do it now.
Show me REAL testimonials from real students.
Your platform for teaching Spanish would be well exposed with dynamic landing pages that focus your advertising efforts.
Feel free to ask me a direct question for more points and an indepth look at exactly what you're doing.
I hope that this helps!
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