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2 years, 8 months ago

What do you think about the Chelsea FC pqge now?

ive been working on it for awhile and i think its paid off. i will read and consider all opions and help full tips.
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nickunderscore | 2 years, 8 months ago
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Besides the fact that I despise Chelsea, only Roman Abramovich seems like a cool guy, the page looks good.

However I think you could work on it a little more. For example adding famous players who have played there. Info about the aforementioned owner would be interesting too since without him Chelsea would be nothing. Furthermore highlight the clubs important titles and most historic moments. I would add a section called "Trophy Room" or "Titles Won" and include the dates or number of the titles won for each contest, such as FA Cup, Premier League, UEFA Champions League, UEFA Cup etc.

One last thing, I wouldnt put advertisment on the very top of my page, it makes a bad first impression. Try start off with "News" or preferably "Mahalo Top 7" sections. Also for your "Fast Facts" and other sections try to give some references, it gives your page an extra touch and more credibility. In fast facts it is easy to give references, for other sections put < r e f > Your Link < / r e f >

PS it appears there are TWO Chelsea FC pages so you should check it out with admins that one is removed because it has no manager anyway. its the Chelsea F.C. page.

However similar tips still are relevant for both pages. Except that yours needs an introductory guide note which states what the page is about. Look at the other Chelsea page to get an idea ;)

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krystyne20 | 2 years, 8 months ago
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One thing I notice right off the bat is that you don't have a Guide Note which is something that every page should have. The Guide Note should be a description of what Chelsea FC is.

See my San Diego Chargers page as an example.

You should also add a Related Mahalo Pages section and Categories.

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