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M$15 July 10, 2009 06:21 PM

Episode VI Winner: Philipy for his Roger Federer Page

July 10: @philipy wins, the two finalists were also sent tips.

July 10: Three Finalist Archives Include @philipy for his Roger Federer, @buddiwiggi for Kancamagus Highway and @beast1oh1 for Democracy

Many quality How-To's were submitted, next Episode will be dedicated to How-To's instead of Archives

July 6: Do you manage a Mahalo Topic Page?
Have you put lots of time towards building your page into the greatest online collection for that topic?

Then this is the contest for you! Simply post a link to your Mahalo Topic Page below and explain what you have done to make the page great. You have all week, the nominees will be judged on July 10.

Rules.
1. Please specify if you claimed the page, or built it from scratch
2. You can participate if you already participated in previous contests.
2a. But, don't submit the same page you submitted in Episode V.
3. Vote helpful for what you think are the best pages.
3a. The most votes doesn't automatically make you the winner, but it does help the judges break a tie.

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Check our Previous Winners
Episode I - @interzone for the UFO Topic Page
Episode II - @krystyne20 for the Theory of a Deadman Topic Page
Episode III - @andreaxxjean for the Christmas Cookies Topic Page
Episode IV - @buddawiggi for the Nashua NH Topic Page
Episode V - @Matthewh for the Extrasolar Planets Top Page
Interesting Question?  Yes (9)   No (0)   

Interesting: interzone, buddawiggi, bunnyphuphu, easyeboy, lesliec, dancingmooney, shinju, kalane, christhomson

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July 06, 2009 07:21 PM
I am going to nominate my Roger Federer page.

I've been reluctant to nominate any of my pages as I regard them all as works-in-progress so far. But this is in pretty good shape, and I think it's a great day to celebrate Roger!

I claimed the page, and the main things I've done to it are...

- Rewrote the Guide Note from scratch
- Updated, added to (and subtracted from!) the Fast Facts
- Most of the content on recent Federer history was written by me
- Hand picked some choice links for the Top 7
- Featured Video - new today... to celebrate his record 15 grand slams
- Featured Photo - from the French Open
- Added useful sections like news and twitter feeds
- Got rid of some old junk

PS I should mention that as it's a newsworthy subject, sometimes Mahalo guides have updated the page as well. Where their input is good usually I leave it in, though generally I edit it as well.
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July 06, 2009 07:40 PM
Nice one! I like your Guide Note section(s), short and focused, covering a wide range of RF-related items.

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July 06, 2009 08:03 PM
Looking good. Well organized. For suggestion, maybe move the videos section up higher. Right now it is at the very bottom.

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July 06, 2009 11:52 PM
I really like how clean, organized, and engaging this page looks. Really well done!

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July 07, 2009 05:02 AM
Great page, definitely one of the best ever.

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July 07, 2009 05:24 AM
Excellent Page @philipy Thank you for submitting it to the challenge. I do believe these particular parts of the guide note need a citation, especially the part about the commentators. Those types of statements should always be cited.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/33749589@N07/3697173940/

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July 07, 2009 07:51 PM
I'm not sure about citing facts that are a) common knowledge and b) mentioned in all the other links.

Added a cite for the "greatest" part, and wrote a small section about that debate.

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July 07, 2009 10:52 PM
Sure @philipy, it's totally your call, honestly I don't know anything about tennis, I have no idea what is common knowledge and what isn't - I'm just old school in how I like seeing news and records being cited.

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July 08, 2009 06:26 PM
I will think some more about citing. :)

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July 10, 2009 03:06 AM
I'd add some citations to your fast facts, and abstracts to your Top 7. Nice page!

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July 10, 2009 10:54 PM
Yay! :)

Thanks for all the votes everyone.

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July 06, 2009 06:49 PM
I built this page from scratch and I would like to enter, and receive some suggestions on how to improve this page Kancamagus Highway. I am open to any ideas of/for improvement. For some reason I'm stuck as to what else to add and you guys are the best critics, so let me have it.
Be hyper-critical.
I really want to make this page shine.
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July 06, 2009 07:27 PM
Good looking page, makes me want to take a drive down that road!

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July 06, 2009 11:53 PM
You used a lot of creativity in building this page! It looks magnificent. Really a great job here, it gives me a great deal to envy and want to duplicate on some of my pages. :D

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July 07, 2009 06:50 PM
Bud, I really love this page, it's really something when you can take a Highway and turn it into such a great collection, great job! Makes me want build one for the Pacific Rim Highway, which I just had the pleasure of driving last weekend.

Anyway, it was hard to find fault, but alas right at the bottom I did, the mhlo.me urls are Mahalo shorturls - if you click on them, they will open the full url of the cite you are referencing. That full url should be the one used in your citations.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/33749589@N07/3698912942/

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July 07, 2009 07:42 PM
Oops.. fixed

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July 10, 2009 03:14 AM
I'd ad some links to Places to Stay and Places to Eat around the Kangamangus Highway, as well as the camping and Hiking links you have-- there's lots of great info!

And as we get closer to peak season, I would have the top section be devoted to the peak dates for foliage along the Kangamangus.

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July 06, 2009 07:01 PM
I would like to submit my democracy page. I built it from scratch. I believe my page doesn't just provide basic information about the topic but also shows a glimpse into the state democracy is in today and the page also has some commentary on the subject.

http://www.mahalo.com/democracy?noprivs
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July 06, 2009 07:32 PM
I think it may be a good idea to move Twitter section up the page, towards the top. Also, you can add a section with links to current, ongoing discussions, blogs, forums, etc.

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July 06, 2009 08:00 PM
Suggestion: see what you can do about the Related Pages section. Right now it lists 3 pages about the Guns and Roses album.

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July 06, 2009 11:53 PM
I've already made the changes recommended any more would be helpful.

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July 07, 2009 07:13 PM
This is a great start and I think by Episode X this might be a winner, until then I think you should spend time on figuring out how this page can be a hub for the democracy movement, there are ongoing struggles for democracy around the world and I think this might a unique opportunity to highlight current event.

Perhaps a News section? and a paragraph in the guide note with the latest buzz. Make note of the Blue Section of this helpful image.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/33749589@N07/3636701718/

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July 08, 2009 09:54 PM
You may wish to explore the definition of republic, and the reasons why our founders created two parties called the Democratic Republicans and the Federalist (Republicans).

Respectfully,
Shin

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July 09, 2009 04:25 PM
I'll probably talk about the concept of a republic on the page but the Democratic Republic and the Federalists are too specific to the United States.

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July 06, 2009 07:52 PM
How to Remove a Basketball Hoop from the Ground
http://www.mahalo.com/how-to-remove-a-basketball-hoop-from-the-ground

http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/31U0AlHE-kL._SL500_AA280_.jpg

This is a page I built from scratch after dealing with the question in real life. I needed to remove a basketball hoop from the ground and even after a lot of internet searching, I could not find out who to call to get the job done.

Thankfully, after asking the question here on Mahalo, I got some good answers and I was able to get the hoop removed from the ground.

Since there was not a lot of information on the topic out there, I decided to write up an original page about how to do it yourself and who you can call to do the job for you.
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July 07, 2009 03:38 AM
as the one who answered you before, I'd have to agree with your comment. There is not a lot of info on this topic on the net.. (haha made a punny)
Good work on the page! Looks great.

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July 07, 2009 06:37 PM
very interesting topic, you seem to know your stuff, I just wonder if your page might have more success if it was called "How to Remove a Basketball Hoop"

Then you could include "from the ground" as well as "from the garage" and anywhere else basketball hoops need to be removed from? Also I think those researching the topic would only go as far as to writing "How to remove a basketball hoop" no matter where they are removing it from?

Let me know what you think.

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July 07, 2009 09:15 PM
@jeffhoard Thanks for the suggestions. I'm ok with the title staying like it is. People should find it even if they only type in the beginning part. I think getting it out of the ground is the most common situation when it comes to these things.

@danny Hehe, I ended up finding a bunch of those videos too when I was searching. So there are a lot of videos telling you how NOT to do it, but none telling you how TO do it hehe.

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July 06, 2009 08:40 PM
My first entry!!!

http://www.mahalo.com/how-to-install-ram-in-a-laptop

How To Install Ram In A Laptop

I claimed the page and added / revised a significant amount of content.

I used my own knowledge and the help of this question to make changes and hopefully save people the trouble and money of completing this easy task.

http://www.mahalo.com/answers/consumer-electronics/how-to-increase-your-computers-ram

http://img.skitch.com/20090706-8d3qgmtn89mgm7hdnckpewqje1.jpg
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July 09, 2009 08:50 AM
I just realized it's impossible judging How-To's up against Archives, but I notice more and more How-To's coming in, I think I'll have to have a separate contest with only How-To's.

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July 09, 2009 09:14 AM
@jeffhoard - I see what you're saying. I agree with you.

I withdraw my entry.

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July 09, 2009 07:13 PM
Stay tuned for Episode VII - It will be dedicated to the How-To :)

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July 07, 2009 03:43 PM
I am working on building the page to bring some FUN into life. Family fun, general audience rated, from my over 50 years of arts and crafts and volunteer experience.

http://www.mahalo.com/family-fun
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http://www.mahalo.com/family-fun


Tags: fun, humor, play, games, family

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July 07, 2009 04:20 PM
Don't forget your fast facts! You might also want to include another section and list some ideas. This page has lots of potential!

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July 07, 2009 07:14 PM
Fun page full of fun stuff, I think it will be really great.

I would move these activities you have at the top and move them into the Guide Note.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/33749589@N07/3698989352/

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July 07, 2009 06:24 PM
I'm going to brag about How to Can Tomatoes. I built it from scratch, thoroughly researched my facts, and followed the guide step by step to make sure it could be followed in sequence. I think its a helpful page that will make sure that people will be able to safely preserve their tomato harvest.

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July 08, 2009 03:20 PM
I would like to nominate my Jack Johnson page, because the other page I had, I decided to abandon.

I'm still new here, so I'm learning, and even in topics I know a lot about, I can see how it can be overwhelming at first, to manage a topic page that goes into great depth. Eventually I will work up to it and get more comfortable...

Until then, I'd like to nominate my Jack Johnson page because I'm pretty happy with how it's come together so far, considering I'm a newbie.

I did not create the page from scratch, but my goal was to organize it in such a way that it's informative but also appealing to the eye.

When you first visit the page, you can naturally find info and facts about him on the right, but the amazon cd's featured in the main section bring life to the page, and I think excitement to the topic... if you're a Jack Johnson fan.

I'd love a little more critique if you don't mind as well... this is fun!
:)
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Jack Johnson


Tags: mahalo, music, jack, johnson, pages

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Helpful: buddawiggi

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July 08, 2009 08:52 PM
Great start, my first tip would be to have the top 7 at the top of the page, as it generally consists of the top links that users are looking for on that topic.

Otherwise, feel free to play around with the toolbar and add more sections.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/33749589@N07/3701591873/

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July 08, 2009 09:35 PM
I'd like to nominate my Cash for Clunkers page:
http://www.mahalo.com/cash-for-clunkers

In the early part of June, I claimed the page, which had five contributors before me. I didn't think much about the page until the money started to roll in a week or so ago. Then I got to work. Primarily, I cleaned up the grammar, to make it easier to read, and updated the links and the information in Fast Facts, etc. I've added as many sponsored links as the page will allow.

I regularly check the related questions on Mahalo to see what people are asking about, and add pertinent information to the page. I also check the Message Board to see if there are suggestions or pieces of information that I can use.

While I've made a lot of progress, I definitely would appreciate any suggestions that can help to increase the revenue.

I also have a link to my related Rebates page(http://www.mahalo.com/rebates), where I include related Cash-for-Clunkers news and information.

Mahalo, where quality is contagious.

Respectfully,
Shin

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July 08, 2009 11:06 PM
You seem to be off to a great start with this page if it's earning revenue for you. I've looked at a lot of people's pages that they've had for a while, that don't seem to be earning much, so kudos for that right off the top!
:D

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July 09, 2009 05:11 AM
Great page, looks like it's real well, don't forget to "inlink" in your guide note, basically put two square brackets around any term we have page on, or should have a page on. And perhaps a citation at the end of the guide note.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/33749589@N07/3702781313/

I also wonder about if there is an official government site about this program, that would be an ideal link for the top of the top 7

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July 09, 2009 08:09 PM
i will nominate my Michael Jackson Page

http://www.mahalo.com/michael-jackson-inside-of-casket

Tags: jackson

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July 09, 2009 09:18 PM
It doesn't look like you've done anything to make the page better beyond creating it. There are lots of doubles in the links, videos and images section and I also think your page should actually redirect to this page - http://www.mahalo.com/michael-jackson-coffin

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July 10, 2009 04:01 AM
I'm not nominating because I think I'll win, I'm nominating because I want advice. My pride and joy of the last 3 weeks. The crown jewel of my 4-page collection: My Touch 3g.

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July 10, 2009 06:58 PM
It is a good page, the ads to content ratio in the sidebar somewhat concerns me.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/33749589@N07/3707163471/

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July 10, 2009 10:27 PM
That was an accident. I put more in by mistake, and now I can't take them out.

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