Good morning Mike, OK personal reviews are not acceptable because it is a personal opinion. If you want to use reviews you must find some from other sources and you must list your source.

I also need you to reword your introduction to these two pages. It was brought to my attention that they sound like they are new releases. "From the director Chris Columbus comes a fantastic comedy Mrs. Doubtfire. " sounds like its a brand new movie.

Unfortunately you need to go through your two pages that you built and do every single thing @smartweb suggested you do in your question. You gave her best answer for a reason! http://www.mahalo.com/answers/mahalo-answers-community/my-mrs-doubtfire-page-is-on-page-13-of-google-how-can-i-get-it-to-rank-higher

Here is an example of a great page
http://www.mahalo.com/2012-movie

Make sure you add categories too your pages also. There is a category for categories already on the pages you just have to use the drop down box. Place your page in every category you think is acceptable to your page.

It might take us a little while to get you there Mike but you are definitely on the right track!

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