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I have keep working in the A Song of Ice and Fire novel series and today I have edited some details in the "A Song of Ice and Fire" page and have created "A Game of Thrones" page and "A Clash of Kings" Page.
Please tell me if I'm doing good, because I want to continue with "A Feast for Crows" and the upcoming "A Dance with Dragons" also, I would like to make a separated page for the TV series of A Game of Thrones.
Thanks in advance :)
Please tell me if I'm doing good, because I want to continue with "A Feast for Crows" and the upcoming "A Dance with Dragons" also, I would like to make a separated page for the TV series of A Game of Thrones.
Thanks in advance :)
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The A Song of Ice and Fire page is looking very nice. Here are some suggestions:
- The "Reception" section would work better as a List than as a Text section. Choose "List" from the Page Builder menu marked "to Guide Note" and enter all of those items in the boxes provided rather than just listing them as you have in a text section. It will look much neater.
- Some of the writing in your "Synopsis" box is a bit awkward. I have cleaned it up for you, but in the future, you may want to proofread or perhaps have a friend help you quickly edit your writing for clarity. I'm always happy to help you out if you have specific questions about writing as well.
- Remember to add some Related Mahalo Pages to your list. I would list pages like your other related pages about "Ice and Fire" novels as well as names like George R R Martin and maybe even related series of books like Lord of the Rings or Redwall. To see the format for Related Mahalo Page sections, check out another Mahalo page, or look at how I have done "internal links" to other Mahalo pages in your Guide Note.
Otherwise, the "Song of Ice and Fire" page looks really great. Well done!
- The "Reception" section would work better as a List than as a Text section. Choose "List" from the Page Builder menu marked "to Guide Note" and enter all of those items in the boxes provided rather than just listing them as you have in a text section. It will look much neater.
- Some of the writing in your "Synopsis" box is a bit awkward. I have cleaned it up for you, but in the future, you may want to proofread or perhaps have a friend help you quickly edit your writing for clarity. I'm always happy to help you out if you have specific questions about writing as well.
- Remember to add some Related Mahalo Pages to your list. I would list pages like your other related pages about "Ice and Fire" novels as well as names like George R R Martin and maybe even related series of books like Lord of the Rings or Redwall. To see the format for Related Mahalo Page sections, check out another Mahalo page, or look at how I have done "internal links" to other Mahalo pages in your Guide Note.
Otherwise, the "Song of Ice and Fire" page looks really great. Well done!
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OK thanks Ion, I have made the corrections
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