Create an executive summary, add your educational and other qualifications, any award and recognitions too if you have any.
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I think that Morriss003 has made some solid suggestions surrounding the flow and grammar of your resume. You can't have TOO many people review your resume for flow and grammar. Sometimes, folks will comment on how to present the content of your resume, but that's not as important as their comments on style and grammar.

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I know that you're protecting your privacy - good idea. However, just to be sure... on your finished resume, use your real name. There shouldn't be any reference to a screen name (geniusofhardwork) anywhere including in the URL. Folks simply won't take you seriously without a real name.

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Your self-employed experience does not flow.

Since you have a lot of self employed experience, I suggest that you tailor (at least) this one section for every different category of job that you apply for.

For example, lets say that you're applying for a job as the Foreman of a construction company. Successful, independent work is a definate asset. However, it's only an asset as it relates to the position you're applying for. Leave out the "Internet Researcher" notes and other points that aren't directly related.

If you're applying to a slew of jobs on the large job posting sites... think about your dream job. Compose a resume template based on the exact skills and keywords that best suit that exact position. Remember not to embellish any facts; hiring managers and HR folks can smell lies a mile away.

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I don't see any education.

Again, this might be to protect your privacy and that's cool... but even if you don't have a lot of education, it's important to show that you're smart and have a personality that is open to new ideas to learn new concepts.

No matter what level of education you have, don't feel inadequate because of it. Your feelings will show on your resume and will reflect throughout the hiring process. Accept who you are and if you need to make a change, do it now.

If you know other applicants may be given a leg up because they have specific certifications or education, it's easy to work around this. Enroll now. Listing "currently enrolled in xyz certificate program" will put you on a level playing field and show that you're willing to do what it takes to get the job.

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Last, revise, revise, revise.

Even while you're actively submitting your resume, make it better.

Go to the library. Books will tell you about resume writing. Resume writing hasn't changed (ever) only the content of our resumes have. Follow the tried-and-true advice of books that have been popular for years. Also, your local library may offer resume writing assistance.

Take your resume and sample cover letters to employment agencies. Even if you're not unemployed, these centers will review your resume and give you tips on how to improve it. It's also not unheard of for one of these folks to say "I have a perfect job for you" even if you're not enrolled in the system.

Seek the assistance of your friends and family. It's tough sometimes to open up your work experience and history to family and friends. Don't let pride get in the way, ask for their help. There are REAL advantages to people who know and trust you realizing that you're looking for a job. At the very least, they'll help you with the flow and grammar.

@jasoncalacanis pointed out that Mahalo has a very good resource on resume writing: http://www.mahalo.com/Resume . Check out some of the online resources available, but don't get caught up in them. There are a variety of opinions and styles of resumes. Beyond the Mahalo Resume resource, I might even stay away from online resume tips and rely on more traditional offline sources of help. This will keep your resume focused and open your efforts up to involve the people you know.

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