2 years, 2 months ago
Iam managing my first page ... American Eagle Outfitters... Can someone tell me how to improve it and make it a better page?
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M$2 Answers
First I want to say that I think you have a great start to this page. Very nice work for your first one :)
I'll try to make a few suggestions that may help you. I would definitely add a featured video. To do this, click on the pull down for "Links" and at the top you will see "Featured Object." Then just find a video that is closely related and put it in with a short 50 - 100 word description. I know that How To pages require a video and topic pages do not, but they definitely benefit ANY page, and when you can find an applicable video, you should add it.
Secondly, I would add more sources. You only have three, and you don't put a source next to every piece of information that is not common knowledge. Having a wide variety of references will really add to your page because you are giving people both trust in your pages' reputability and links for their own further research.
Lastly, I would inlink just a tiny bit less. You inlink the whole phrase "USA and Canda", and Canada is spelled wrong. Make sure you check for spelling first and foremost. Try to inlink words, not whole sentences which you tend to do. Make sure you inlink American Eagle Outfitters right at the top in your guide note, not later in your "Education" section. Just make sure all the things you are inlinking make sense as links, and pertain to your page. You don't want to overdo it.
For additional information and help, you can always visit the Mahalo Page Management Guide or talk to your vertical manager, who, in this case, is @smartweb.
Overall, though, I think the foundation of information you have on this page is a lot better than many people start with, especially on their first page. In time, you will get the hang of it, and all these little technicalities will be second nature. Good luck and I hope this helped!
I'll try to make a few suggestions that may help you. I would definitely add a featured video. To do this, click on the pull down for "Links" and at the top you will see "Featured Object." Then just find a video that is closely related and put it in with a short 50 - 100 word description. I know that How To pages require a video and topic pages do not, but they definitely benefit ANY page, and when you can find an applicable video, you should add it.
Secondly, I would add more sources. You only have three, and you don't put a source next to every piece of information that is not common knowledge. Having a wide variety of references will really add to your page because you are giving people both trust in your pages' reputability and links for their own further research.
Lastly, I would inlink just a tiny bit less. You inlink the whole phrase "USA and Canda", and Canada is spelled wrong. Make sure you check for spelling first and foremost. Try to inlink words, not whole sentences which you tend to do. Make sure you inlink American Eagle Outfitters right at the top in your guide note, not later in your "Education" section. Just make sure all the things you are inlinking make sense as links, and pertain to your page. You don't want to overdo it.
For additional information and help, you can always visit the Mahalo Page Management Guide or talk to your vertical manager, who, in this case, is @smartweb.
Overall, though, I think the foundation of information you have on this page is a lot better than many people start with, especially on their first page. In time, you will get the hang of it, and all these little technicalities will be second nature. Good luck and I hope this helped!
You can leave an optional "tip" with Mahalo's virtual currency, Mahalo Dollars. If you are asking a difficult question that might require some research, or if you'd like a wide variety of feedback, a higher tip often leads to more answers to your question.
M$
No problem! I love the page!
Thank you so much !! I will go do the corrections, I really appreciate the input !!