I tried my writing skills (literary) for the first time ever , any suggestions you may give to a first timer
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2. You had no introduction or conclusion to your article. You jumped right into the main points without preparing your audience.
3. Its versus it's. Its means belonging to it. It's means it is. Yes, this is grammar again, but you do it quite often.
4. Be more confident/concrete with your statements. You use too many phrases like "has often been found" that don't make you sound very certain of your points.
5. No sources. You state that these are the biggest mistakes but have no evidence for your findings.
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Further, look at writersdigest.com and www.pw.org/ (poets & writers) for tips on technique and paths for starting writers.
Finally, don't be discouraged. Everyone has great ideas, on the truly motivated get those ideas down on paper.
Good luck!
I'm a professional writer - www.jeffcutler.com - and have taught classes and spoken at conferences about freelance writing. I also write 16 blogs, report for a number of news agencies and contribute to multiple online sites (savvyauntie.com, mobilemag.com, macnn.com).
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Try http://www.duotrope.com/ for tons of places that will take submissions.
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Thanks - the most detailed suggestion so far, will make sure to correct my grammar