Hi @vicgoodwin your page looks like it is coming long nicely and you have done a good job so far. I have two positive suggestions for the page

1. The related Mahalo Pages section can be done differently with much better results. Using the "Text" section from the drop down menu in "guide note" you can get that section to look like this.
http://content.screencast.com/users/buddawiggi/folders/Jing/media/dbff3718-4a83-42af-9f26-f601b14185aa/2009-09-29_2013.png

Once you have the section in there click edit and you should be able to use this as a model from my New England page. Using this method allows you to put as many related pages as you desire.
http://content.screencast.com/users/buddawiggi/folders/Jing/media/43f35859-45f0-4fd0-bcb6-41ac31128b50/2009-09-29_2017.png

2. Your topic seems like the kind that would have active news stories going on around the world that are related to Tropical Deforestation. This will make adding to the Guide Note section easy for you. I would suggest adding a "Text" section to your Guide Note you can highlight some of these news stories by adding whole sections about them and as mentioned in this thread also, be sure to use citations.
Below is an example of how I did this on my Acadia National Park page after Hurricane Bill made a mess of the central Maine coast earlier this year.
http://content.screencast.com/users/buddawiggi/folders/Jing/media/c06c47d3-ba62-487a-95db-98eeb2d812d1/2009-09-29_2022.png

If you need any other help or suggestions I will do my best to tell you what I can.. we are all learning this together.

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