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Would anyone care to critique my "managed page" on the community orchestra that I play in?
OK, I think I am getting the hang of it, editing these managed pages. I play violin in the Oahu Civic Orchestra. How would I get this page to display more relevant ads? Perhaps on mail order music supplies, sheet music or instrument dealers, or ad links to CDs or downloadable music with similar titles as those displayed in the videos? Maybe local music shops?
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Looks really good. I think you could add a news section perhaps, or a section on upcoming events maybe. Also you can inlink dates in your text sections and perhaps Oahu. Great video and picture sections too! Good job on a topic your obviously know a lot about.
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Thanks for the tips! Aloha!
voted helpful: duenhsiyen
Wow, looks very nice and organized, and you are definitely an expert on the topic. I like the featured picture you added. I also like how you arranged the related pages. This will be an nice accompaniment to the official website.
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