Can anyone proofread my assginment.. thank you
Survival in Auschwitz
Primo Levi
Thinking about the selection
2)Mr Flesh reluctant to translant the german officers comment into italian because he knows all of the questions that they were asking were useless.
3) Levi think its important for prisoners to hang on their names because it will remain part of their dignity.
4)I think what Levi means by the phrase to lie on the bottom is, the extermination camp.
Analyzing Literature
3) The final step in stripping prisoner of their identity is to take away their names.
2)The prisoners were unwilling to life their eyes and look at each other because not only were they naked but they were ashamed and embarrassed, and felt depress
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2)Mr Flesh was reluctant to translate the German officers' comments into Italian because he knows that all of the questions that they were asking were useless.
3) Levi thinks it is important for prisoners to hang on their names because it will remain part of their dignity.
4)I think what Levi means by the phrase "to lie on the bottom" is the extermination camp.
{I'm not sure what you mean}
Analyzing Literature
3) The final step in stripping the prisoners of their identity is to take away their names.
2)The prisoners were unwilling to open their eyes and look at each other because, not only were they naked, but they were ashamed and embarrassed, and felt depressed.
notes:
work more on grammar
capitalize names of nations or languages
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M$Many of your sentences jump from present to past and back again. Next you should continue with the sentence, "it was terrible seeing all the innocent people that had been killed after they had everything, even religious freedom, taken away from them." Then, "The Nazis took power and exterminated (DO NOT SAY EVERY SINGLE PERSON THAT IS INCORRECT)all ages, including babies, children, young adults, middle aged and elder people." The rest of the paragraph is ok..
#2 Needs to say, "Mr. Flesh was reluctant to translate the German officer's comment into Italian because he knew all of the questions they were asking were pontless." NOTE: You have several kinds of errors here. You need to capitalize the countries, there should be a period after Mr., and Mr. Flesh WAS reluctant because he KNEW.
#3 Needs Levi "thinks" not "think", "hang onto" not "hang on."
Analyzing Literature
#3 Needs "prisoners" not "prisoner"
#2 The prisoners were unwilling to "lift" not "life" their eyes....and "depressed" not "depress."
I am a writer and trained in English grammer and spelling. I belong to two honor societies in education.
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Sorry, on #2 I spelled a word wrong.....it should be "pointless."
No, grammer is not accepted in any country
I agree with your additional corrections
I think you also misspelled "grammar" in the source section. (Not sure if "-er" is an alternative spelling, or preferred in some countries.)
Books can make you cry. It's odd isn't it when what one of us can see or feel can be written down and make us think about what makes mankind act in a particular way.
I do not know if we will ever be able to change.
Thanks.
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