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A few taglines, to which you can append whatever information you'd like:
You've got one job. Why should vacation planning be another?
Better than pointing on a globe.
We get you there fast. You take it slow.
No More Vacation Stress!
Get off those travel sites and see the world!
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Skip the hassle of planning a Trip,
We've got a grip that will zip you to sunshine,
Dining and dancing and leisure that's fine."
I know, you didn't ask for a jingle, but I couldn't help it.
But if you just work with the fist line and do something like, "Take a holiday from planning your vacation", then you should be able to do something with that.
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Here are a few options I've come up with:
We'll Plan It; You'll Enjoy It ... Guaranteed!
Let Us Do What We Do Best To Ensure That You Get That Vacation Feeling Before You Even Set Foot On The Plane!
We'll Plan It All For You If You'll Take a Deep, Relaxing Breath For Us!
RELAX! We've Got It All Covered ... Let Us Take The Stress Out Of Planning Your Next Vacation.
and my personal favorite:
Let Us Make Choosing that Perfect Bikini the Hardest Decision You Need to Make to Prepare for Your Vacation This Summer!
(with this one, you can simply substitute the relevant season and preferred article of clothing/equipment. For example, Let Us Make Choosing that Perfect Snowboard the Hardest Decision You Need to Make to Prepare for Your Vacation This Winter!)
Hope one of these helps!
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Destination (Fill in the blank) is waiting for you. We know, we've planned it!
Or maybe something like
Beat the vacation planning gridlock. We'll give you an I-pass.
or
We've issued an I-pass to vacation planning deadlock.
Hope they help.
Source(s):
My own thoughts on the subject.
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Need to get away right away? We'll get your vacation started.
Need to get away right away? We've got the plans. You get the sunscreen.
Is your travel planning in peril? Let XYZ save the day!
Ready to pack your bags and go? XYZ has your vacation waiting for you!
-OR-
Ready to pack your bags and go? Your vacation's waiting for you!
Buried under a mountain of travel books? Relax, your vacation starts now.
Put down the travel books. Your vacation begins NOW.
XYZ will get you on your way.
Just a few ideas. ;)
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While brainstorming... I keep visualizing a little animation in my head of a person who is blindfolded and spinning a plastic globe and sticking out their finger.
Or... another blindfolded person aiming a dart at a flat map of the world.
(just my crazy 2 cents...)
"Vacation time is precious. Deciding what to do with it can be stressful.
Let us work on creating a truly memorable trip for you!"
Good luck with your endeavors!
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"Take a vacation from your travel planning frustrations! Call xyz today!"
"Travel plans unraveling? Xyz can wind you up today!"
or "Travel plans unraveling? Xyz can help today!"
"Lost in booking? Xyz can find your vacation!"
With the globe spinning finger thing in mind...
"It's where ever your finger lands on the globe, our time on the phone. Let xyz book you today!"
Just a few ideas.. I may come back and add some in comment later, but that's all I've got for now.
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We plan.
You enjoy.
Speaking of which, do you have a link? I'm planning to hopefully go to Egypt at the end of 010 and the websites for tours are overwhelming :P Also, I don't want to just see a list of all the deals, I want them explained in detail :)
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Pack your bags. We've got the ititnerary.
You pick the (place, dates, price). Leave the details to us.
XYZ. Because your only worry should be which (coat, swimsuit, camera) to pack.
We take great care so you can be carefree.
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or
Cut Through The Clutter - Vacations Start NOW
or
(Brandname) Instant Vacation Kit, Just add you
or
Is time is of the essence? Need your vacation plans now? For guaranteed instant satisfaction (Brandname)
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Brain Farmers
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2) Is your vacation planning turning out to be as complicated as solving a rubix cube? We are experts at putting the pieces in place.
3) We work hard at planning your next vacation.
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Your Wanderlust shouldn't keep you wondering where to go!
Wonder LESS, Travel MORE, enjoy your Wanderlust!
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You dream it, we'll help you see it.
Your dreams, our magic carpet. Travel simplified
Paradise uncomplicated.
Who say's planning your vacation is easy? We do. Dream it. Done!
Once in a lifetime shouldn't take a lifetime to plan. Dream it. Done!
If I could go anywhere in the world.....Done!
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You can follow up with a "We will help you choose/find etc, ...." phrase to convey more info to the customer. Hope this helps.
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"You dream it, we plan it"
"Your wish is our command"
"your good-times butler"
"Relax, your vacation is already planned"
"travel concierge at your service"
"you pick out the swimsuit, we'll take care of the rest"
"You chose the sunscreen, we'll take care of the rest"
"All you need to do is pack the sunscreen"
"Your no stress vacation destination"
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November 03, 2009 09:26 AM
We need an amazing and attention grabbing travel advertising headline!
Background: Imagine you are fed up with trying to book a vacation - there is too much information and there are too many options. Our new product has the solution to this and provides you with a range of great vacation options based on your needs. But we need an advertising headline to grab your attention.
Ideally we need something that poses an engaging question or a problem, along with a solution which will grab the customer's attention
The phrase "Is choosing a vacation too complicated? Let us find great trips for you" is technically correct, but boring...
Can you come up with something exciting for us??
Ideally we need something that poses an engaging question or a problem, along with a solution which will grab the customer's attention
The phrase "Is choosing a vacation too complicated? Let us find great trips for you" is technically correct, but boring...
Can you come up with something exciting for us??
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| November 03, 2009 01:09 PM |
You've got one job. Why should vacation planning be another?
Better than pointing on a globe.
We get you there fast. You take it slow.
No More Vacation Stress!
Get off those travel sites and see the world!
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• The "You've got one job. Why should vacation planning be another?" was our favorite, and the one closest to our product ideal.
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marklad202...
November 03, 2009 01:36 PM
Really like the one about the job!
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lynxlee
November 03, 2009 06:21 PM
Yeah, I like the one with the job a lot!
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November 03, 2009 01:33 PM
That's the kind of feeling we're trying to give the customer. Thanks.
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November 03, 2009 11:22 AM
"Take a Vacation from Vacation planning, Skip the hassle of planning a Trip,
We've got a grip that will zip you to sunshine,
Dining and dancing and leisure that's fine."
I know, you didn't ask for a jingle, but I couldn't help it.
But if you just work with the fist line and do something like, "Take a holiday from planning your vacation", then you should be able to do something with that.
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November 03, 2009 02:15 PM
Of course not, nobody is... that's what was supposed to make it funny,
The point was to just look at seeing if you could use the first stanza, or maybe something from the second one.
I'm one of that 15% of the population who are blind to marketing pitches and goes strait to the details in the fine print, but I always thought it would be intriguing to find a line that really did get my attention, because it would be fascinating to a neuropsychologist to find out why that worked, plus it would be important to marketing people who've got a challenge going to see if any of them ever could find a line that would get to the ones who are unaffected.
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The point was to just look at seeing if you could use the first stanza, or maybe something from the second one.
I'm one of that 15% of the population who are blind to marketing pitches and goes strait to the details in the fine print, but I always thought it would be intriguing to find a line that really did get my attention, because it would be fascinating to a neuropsychologist to find out why that worked, plus it would be important to marketing people who've got a challenge going to see if any of them ever could find a line that would get to the ones who are unaffected.
November 03, 2009 11:27 AM
Hi Marklad2020, Here are a few options I've come up with:
We'll Plan It; You'll Enjoy It ... Guaranteed!
Let Us Do What We Do Best To Ensure That You Get That Vacation Feeling Before You Even Set Foot On The Plane!
We'll Plan It All For You If You'll Take a Deep, Relaxing Breath For Us!
RELAX! We've Got It All Covered ... Let Us Take The Stress Out Of Planning Your Next Vacation.
and my personal favorite:
Let Us Make Choosing that Perfect Bikini the Hardest Decision You Need to Make to Prepare for Your Vacation This Summer!
(with this one, you can simply substitute the relevant season and preferred article of clothing/equipment. For example, Let Us Make Choosing that Perfect Snowboard the Hardest Decision You Need to Make to Prepare for Your Vacation This Winter!)
Hope one of these helps!
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November 03, 2009 01:34 PM
Really like the "make choosing the xzy the hardest decision" line. Right now we're just trying to find a way to make it shorter / punchier, and to make it appeal to men as well as women...
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November 03, 2009 05:31 PM
You could change this to "Make choosing your wardrobe the hardest decision in vacation planning. Leave the rest to us."
Sorry if this is inappropriate to butt in like this but was re-reading the thread, saw the comment and got an idea.
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Sorry if this is inappropriate to butt in like this but was re-reading the thread, saw the comment and got an idea.
November 03, 2009 01:36 PM
Thanks, I like it, but it's a bit complictated (takes some processing for the casual reader). But thanks!!
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November 03, 2009 02:25 PM
Well maybe you can use some of it somehow in the copy. I agree it's a bit much for a headline or a title. I hope you get something really great!! Good luck.
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November 03, 2009 08:21 PM
If you left off the "travel trauma..." part I think it would sound better. Short and sweet.
"You pay, You play. We do the work. The way it should be!"
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"You pay, You play. We do the work. The way it should be!"
November 03, 2009 01:56 PM
How about Destination (Fill in the blank) is waiting for you. We know, we've planned it!
Or maybe something like
Beat the vacation planning gridlock. We'll give you an I-pass.
or
We've issued an I-pass to vacation planning deadlock.
Hope they help.
Source(s):
My own thoughts on the subject.
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November 03, 2009 02:14 PM
Need to get away right away? We've got you covered. Need to get away right away? We'll get your vacation started.
Need to get away right away? We've got the plans. You get the sunscreen.
Is your travel planning in peril? Let XYZ save the day!
Ready to pack your bags and go? XYZ has your vacation waiting for you!
-OR-
Ready to pack your bags and go? Your vacation's waiting for you!
Buried under a mountain of travel books? Relax, your vacation starts now.
Put down the travel books. Your vacation begins NOW.
XYZ will get you on your way.
Just a few ideas. ;)
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November 03, 2009 02:43 PM
Mr. Marklad - While brainstorming... I keep visualizing a little animation in my head of a person who is blindfolded and spinning a plastic globe and sticking out their finger.
Or... another blindfolded person aiming a dart at a flat map of the world.
(just my crazy 2 cents...)
"Vacation time is precious. Deciding what to do with it can be stressful.
Let us work on creating a truly memorable trip for you!"
Good luck with your endeavors!
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November 03, 2009 03:02 PM
Playing on some ideas you said you liked: "Take a vacation from your travel planning frustrations! Call xyz today!"
"Travel plans unraveling? Xyz can wind you up today!"
or "Travel plans unraveling? Xyz can help today!"
"Lost in booking? Xyz can find your vacation!"
With the globe spinning finger thing in mind...
"It's where ever your finger lands on the globe, our time on the phone. Let xyz book you today!"
Just a few ideas.. I may come back and add some in comment later, but that's all I've got for now.
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November 03, 2009 04:47 PM
You pick. We plan.
You enjoy.
Speaking of which, do you have a link? I'm planning to hopefully go to Egypt at the end of 010 and the websites for tours are overwhelming :P Also, I don't want to just see a list of all the deals, I want them explained in detail :)
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November 04, 2009 06:13 PM
Sure, we have a link (http://offermeatrip.com) although the site is still under development, and on launch (January) we will only be offering the service to customers based in the United Kingdom. - for now.
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November 03, 2009 05:12 PM
XYZ. Because vacation planning shouldn't feel like extra baggage. Pack your bags. We've got the ititnerary.
You pick the (place, dates, price). Leave the details to us.
XYZ. Because your only worry should be which (coat, swimsuit, camera) to pack.
We take great care so you can be carefree.
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November 03, 2009 05:24 PM
Rapidly Get There From Here Using (Brandname Travel) or
Cut Through The Clutter - Vacations Start NOW
or
(Brandname) Instant Vacation Kit, Just add you
or
Is time is of the essence? Need your vacation plans now? For guaranteed instant satisfaction (Brandname)
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November 03, 2009 08:00 PM
Even though it's not the format @marklad2020 was looking for, there's something about "click, pick, pack, and go" that kind of gets stuck in your head. In a good way. I like it.
...co-stan-za...
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...co-stan-za...
November 03, 2009 08:26 PM
I agree with gno. That really is stuck in my head right now! I try to read further below this but I keep thinking "click, pick, pack and go!" It's catchy, simple and reminds me of those commercials you can't help but remember.
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November 04, 2009 06:15 PM
Yep, Pick Pack and Go is one of our favorite tag-lines. The pity is that it's not very descriptive.
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November 04, 2009 06:21 PM
How about: Dont spend a vacation planning a vacation, (Insert Your Company Name) and then Click, Pick, Pack and Go.
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November 03, 2009 05:31 PM
1) Vacation like a child again, no hassles, no worries, just the thrill of it all. 2) Is your vacation planning turning out to be as complicated as solving a rubix cube? We are experts at putting the pieces in place.
3) We work hard at planning your next vacation.
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November 03, 2009 05:33 PM
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Your Wanderlust shouldn't keep you wondering where to go!
Wonder LESS, Travel MORE, enjoy your Wanderlust!
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November 03, 2009 05:52 PM
Variations on dreams and a dream vacation theme. You dream it, we'll help you see it.
Your dreams, our magic carpet. Travel simplified
Paradise uncomplicated.
Who say's planning your vacation is easy? We do. Dream it. Done!
Once in a lifetime shouldn't take a lifetime to plan. Dream it. Done!
If I could go anywhere in the world.....Done!
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November 03, 2009 08:23 PM
I love the last two! OMG! that made me laugh! "a better way to get lost." LOL
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November 04, 2009 12:53 AM
@legaleagle, sorry I just don't see how your answer had anything to do with what the asker wanted at all. If I'm wrong, I apologize. ;)
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November 03, 2009 09:46 PM
Here are a couple of ideas: - Planning your vacation? Stop planning and start enjoying.
- Still planning your vacation? Check out our special tips.
You can follow up with a "We will help you choose/find etc, ...." phrase to convey more info to the customer. Hope this helps.
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November 04, 2009 05:57 PM
"Less time planning, more time tanning" "You dream it, we plan it"
"Your wish is our command"
"your good-times butler"
"Relax, your vacation is already planned"
"travel concierge at your service"
"you pick out the swimsuit, we'll take care of the rest"
"You chose the sunscreen, we'll take care of the rest"
"All you need to do is pack the sunscreen"
"Your no stress vacation destination"
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