The page in question is here: http://www.mahalo.com/tasks/how-to-rush-week-build-a-how-to-page-on-how-to-stay-mentally-sharp I am not on a "How to" team. This is my first attempt at doing this. When I claimed the task, I got what you see in the photo below. So I started to do some research, just for a few minutes and jotted my notes into the boxes. Then I submitted it, assuming I could revise it. I don't see any edit button come up. Just my notes all strung together on one page, with no way to revise them. Then I found out that there apparently is already a page on the subject, ( http://www.mahalo.com/how-to-stay-mentally-sharp ) so I don't know what I am supposed to do. Improve upon a page that is already being managed? I have a lot of ideas, but am I supposed to build the page somewhere else? I don't understand. I thought it said I had 72 hours to do revisions. Can anyone explain the process or point to a page that explains the process?

duenhsiyen

Now, after submitting this question, and clicking on the top link, I notice I do get back the frame you see in the photo with my notes. So I guess I can start revising them?

OK, now I see an email that says:
Hi duenhsiyen,

Unfortunately, ssmacd has recently rejected your submission to the following task: http://www.mahalo.com/tasks/how-to-rush-week-build-a-how-to-page-on-how-to-stay-mentally-sharp

Guide name provided the following feedback:

It appears that his task was submitted incomplete, so I'm returning it so you can finish it. Based on what you've included already, though, I have a few tips.
1. Delete the instructions from the step box before competing it.
2.The guide note should be a brief overview of what the page will cover. It needs to include the exact page title in a sentence. It should not include lists of ways to stay mentally sharp.
3. This is a health page, so any assertions you make about how to stay mentally sharp should be supported by a reliable source(reliable sources would include health authorities like Mayo Clinic, Merck Manuals, WebMD or the like. It would not include sources like eHow or Wikihow, for example). Include the url of the source in ref tags (url) after the sentence in which you make the assertion.
4. Relalted Pages should be only Mahalo pages--format them like this Alzheimer's Test | How to Prevent Alzheimer's | Dementia

Thanks! Susan

If you would like to try again, please visit the task and reclaim it.

Thanks,
The Mahalo Tasks Team

So it looks Iike I have to complete it off line somewhere, and then paste into the boxes? I did not want to delete the notes in the box, until I'm through, just to remind me of what to do. Do, I just keep on submitting improvements and then reclaiming the task? Does 72 hours mean that I can always reclaim the page within 72 hours of posting? Will someone else reformat the information that I submit into a new Mahalo "How to" page?